Showing posts with label The Crafts of Writing. Show all posts
Showing posts with label The Crafts of Writing. Show all posts

Monday, 17 August 2026

Flash Fiction Writing: 7 Rules for Success

Flash fiction is usually defined as being under 1,000 words. As a writer who loves the long and complex novel, something that weighs a ton and takes a nice long time to read, I'm quite a stranger to 'less than 1000'. But I'm now trying to write a couple of <1000s, each month, at around 500-700 words and I'm enjoying it. I'm sharing some of these short-shorts on Substack. 

They say it all started with the 'six-word story' written by Ernest Hemingway (which we all know, don't we? For sale, baby shoes, never worn... Here's some more recent 6-word attemps, 

"Wrong number," said a familiar voice."

"Ghost seeks body. No experience necessary." 
"Introduced myself to myself. Amnesia hurts."
Six-words stories are clever, but I don't find them very satisfying. I prefer something that has a clear beginning, middle and end, even though it's only hundreds of words long. Every so often I offer one to be read: you can find my latest here, on Substack:
I've learnt a few lessons as I've been honing the craft. And it is a craft, and possibly an art; people continue to debate the difference between these stories and poetry. I'm not going down that wormhole today except to say that flashfiction must tell a story; a poem does not need to. 
Very short fiction depends on having complete control of point of view and language including tense, and working out how much detail to put in your story. Reading Short Circuit, the book about writing short fiction, (editied by Vanessa Gebbe), I noticed that a famous early short-shortist, Edgar Keret, had five staunch rules for the form. 
Number One: Sweat the Title 
'Make it work for a living', Keret recommends. it can anchor the story, or illuminate the theme, click with the surprise in store for the reader, explain the plot, develop character flaws or expand a metaphore you're weaving in. You could steal it  (titles are pretty immune from plagiarism rules), add hidden context, create drama, friction, emotion. The best advice is; don't use vague terms. Don't call your story about your cat, The Cat's Adventure. Call it Midnight Escapology, or something even wilder. 
Number Two: Don't use too many Characters 
A story of  less than 1,000 words can’t hold the number of characters longer pieces can. It must have the least number of characters and one point of view.
Number Three: Start in the Middle
Use your In Medias Res knowledge to drop into the story as late as you possibly can. You don't have time for exposition or scene setting. You don't have space for life stories.
Number Four: Make Sure the Ending is in the not at the End
Creating a microscopic volta can help focus a flash fiction. Volta is a literary term for a turning point which shifts the perspective. this way you can summarise the narrative in very few words, exposing the emotional core of the story. Keret believed that getting to the denouement before the end helps the reader wind the story down as it plays out.
Number Five: Make your Last Line Ring like a Bell.
Your last line isn't your ending; we had that at that volta moment (above). Keret says the last line should leave the reader wth something which will continue to sound after the story has finished...take us into a new place, where we can continue to think about the ideas in the story, puzzle over them.
The more I practise the art of flash fiction, honing it each time I start a new story, the more I realise that, five rules just isn't enough! So I'm adding these two to the mix:
Number Six: Hook your Reader with Voice. 

Character is a defining force in flash fiction, therefore, the voice of the narrator becomes an essential component in hooking the reader in from the beginning. Create a distinct voice that is saying something arresting and original.

Number Seven: Tighten to Get the Word Count Down
Flash fiction thrives on compression. There is no time to stop and smell the roses, so sneak your description in, using powerful imagery to convey emotions and themes You have to imply any world-building with no extra wordage. Flashbacks really don't work, and you can cut down on speech tags––and eliminate adverbs. Avoid exposition; SHOW everthing and TELL nothing. Remove details unless they are critical to the meaning of your story. Take out everything that doesn't move the story on––even dialogue if it holds the story up. In fact, the only thing I insist on including in my short fiction is the name of the narrator. I know writers love to keep that quiet, but readers really want to know. 
But Remember––Rules, are made to be broken! 
Who knows, a flashback may make the story sing. The entire piece could be in dialogue; or description. You might find three characters are really necessary! Nothing is impossible. Because flash fiction is as much fun to write as it is to read.


Thursday, 4 December 2025

Weeding out those writing opportunities!

Let me welcome our guest writer for November, with a blogpost about finding affordable opportunities for developing your craft. 

Written by Deborah Barry.

 The catalyst for rediscovering the craft 

2020 – lockdown year – I completed my Open University Modern Languages degree and rediscovered my love of writing along the way. Deprived of a graduation ceremony – the elation of seeing my short Spanish story entitled  Luna in print (Open University: A Multilingual Decameron) – was spine-tingling. Family and friends pestered – what was this traumatised child’s story about? So, the seeds of my debut novel Speak To Me were sewn. 

Arvon – offering equality 

 The Hurst 

A work colleague recommended the Arvon Organisation and I have nothing but praise, having
  found their support invaluable as I navigated the world of writing as a fledging writer. A fully-inclusive charity that supports all writers – their only requirement is to love writing!  They offer a wealth of courses for writers at all stages of their development. There are both concession rates (around a third off the full course fee), grants (for those on low incomes) and occasionally fully-funded places for under-represented writers.  I applied and was very fortunate to secure a fully-funded place on a creative non-fiction tutored retreat at The Hurst in Shropshire.  The tutored retreat – offering a balance of structure and free time to write/rest – was ideal. Classes typically started at 10am with a coffee break and finished at 1pm. 
All meals were provided, lunch is prepared by Arvon’s staff, all very healthy, using local ingredients. Supper is a team affair, with readings by one of the two tutors and a guest
speaker. Sharing our work on the last evening was daunting but so good for building your self-confidence as a writer. 

I have since returned to The Hurst for a Self-Editing course and Arvon
published my experience on their blogs: https://www.arvon.org/my-arvon-week-debi-barry/ One final point – the courses present an excellent networking opportunity – I am still in contact with a tutor who is a published author and her advice has been invaluable.  Also I’m still in touch with some of the writers I met.  It was both refreshing and soul-warming to know other writers suffer the same insecurities as you do!

 The Literary Consultancy is the main organisation behind the Free Reads scheme which is an Arts Council England funded initiative. Applications go through a regional writing partner, e.g. the National Centre for Writing, Arvon and Spread the Word. They offer a free initial manuscript appraisal they offer to talented writers from marginalised backgrounds  and under-represented groups.  If successful, an initial report on the first 15,000 words of your manuscript is provided.  They offer a 100% (and 2 at 50%) bursary on their 6-week Self Editing Fiction course, whichI found it hugely beneficial as I had my work assessed by an established crime writer who commented on all the key areas of writing a novel: theme(s), characterisation, plot (conflict, climax), voice, setting, POV (point of view) e.g. 1st, 2nd or 3rd person and dialogue.

I enjoyed working with Jon Barton, an award-winning author.  As well as 12 hours of live teaching online, I received a report ahead of my initial 1:1 session with Jon (based on a small sample of my writing). I was impressed with the level of detail Jon gave given the extract was small. His feedback was constructive and thought-provoking and will definitely help me in honing my manuscript to a submission standard.  A wealth of digital resources are available during and after the course has finished, which have proven extremely useful as I wrestle with my second draft.  The small group dynamic (maximum of 12 per course) also helped me work collaboratively with other writers which is sometimes difficult in the virtual world.  TLC offer a range of resources for writers – many of which are free to download; https://literaryconsultancy.co.uk/resources/

Calling female writers!

Mslexia magazine is a great resource, offering both support, courses as well as submission opportunities.  They offer bursary places on their on-line courses. I successfully applied for 

a place on an Editing Your Novel course a few years ago.  Although very intensive (9.00 – 5.00pm each day for a week) the quality of both the teaching and wealth of resources was very high. 

There is a quarterly magazine available – digital is available on a quarterly recurring subscription (£6.99) or one-year subscription (£22.99), the printed version is £32/year by DD on a recurring subscription or £42 as a one-off payment.

They offer membership to the Salon for an additional £10 which gives you free entry to specific submissions not available to ordinary members and a wealth of resources and writing tips. I’d definitely recommend subscribing!  https://mslexia.co.uk/

Be brave!

Five years on, I’m on my second draft and hope to send it out in 2026.  I have  a huge sense of accomplishment at the opportunities I’ve managed to secure over this time as well as an extensive writer’s tool-kit. 

Grants, free places,  bursaries, concessionary rates

These writing events can be expensive, but there are hundreds of opportunities to get a reduction on the full price.  The ones I’ve selected are based solely on my experience, but you may find useful: 

  • Sounds obvious, but check the criteria carefully before you apply. There is nothing more frustrating than discovering you’ve spent a few hours writing a letter for a place and you’re not eligible. Some are restricted to specific under-represented groups (e.g. working-class writers, those with a disability, BAHME writers) or aimed at young people, students, for example. Be mindful of this. Self-published writers take care - some opportunities do accept submissions whilst others don’t.
  • Be transparent – especially for financially-related opportunities. Increasingly, organisations want evidence of low-income especially if you have limited income but do not qualify for state benefits.  
  • Treat each application with the same care and consideration you would devote to a job application. Do exactly what they ask for e.g. if they stipulate 3,000 words don’t send 4,000. Swot up on the organisation and ensure you tailor the application to align with their ethos. Make it personal, show how the opportunity would benefit you in terms of self-development and/or how it will help your writing.  Show your enthusiasm and passion but be yourself. 
  • If you’re serious about getting published by whichever means and entering competitions, consider buying The Writers’ & Artists’ Yearbook (published annually by Bloomsbury (https://www.writersandartists.co.uk/advice). It should be available in the Reference section of your local library or you can buy a good second-hand copy on one of the many online book providers. 
  • Visit your local library – serendipity was smiling on me when I discovered a published writer Lynn Griffin was setting up a local writing group and the first meeting was on my birthday!  Two years later, our little group is still going strong, and I find a tremendous support. It has brought me both the trust and friendship of fellow writers as well as the expertise and life experience of an extremely modest writer.  Check out Lynn Griffin’s blog at https://www.wifeinthewest.com/
  • Where competitions offer a response date, do check up once this has passed. I emailed about a bursary place I hadn’t heard back from. Although I wasn’t the winner, I was next in line because I’d been pro-active and chased. I was lucky enough to be offered the place when the initial winner had to withdraw due to personal circumstances.  From the course, I was able to submit a chapter of my novel which I was delighted to learn was accepted for publication in Dialect Writers’ 2022 anthology.  Dialect support writers in rural areas in particular and further details can be found at https://www.dialect.org.uk/

  • Writing Competitions

If you are an under-represented writer, some organisations offer a fixed number of free or heavily subsidised places – so do check, because the entry fees can mount up – £10 is pretty standard. The most expensive I’ve entered was Bath Novel Prize at £29.99. 


I’ve spent a lot of time and energy applying for competitions and have yet to win anything.  However, that’s not to say you won’t!  Competitions can be found either on-line or via the Writers’ & Artists’ Yearbook or Mslexia Indie Press Guide. 


It’s such a competitive business. It’s best to remember that even local competitions receive hundreds of entries.  A recent one I’d entered had over 2,000 entries!  It’s also highly subjective. My writing is more commercial fiction and perhaps doesn’t ‘stand out’ – yours might. 


Someone has to win!

The best of luck! 

 

My writing group buddies! 



Saturday, 19 April 2025

Core Emotional Truth: A Craft of Creative Writing

 




Emotional truth is elusive and difficult to capture. No standard definition exists. Here’s my crack at it: Emotional truth allows readers to feel a certain way about the experiences of people who may live different lives from them. It’s the lens that allows us to see ourselves in a story that results in a heartfelt connection in a fictional narrative. Emotional truth transcends facts...Writer's Digest. 

Writing fiction? Have you ever pulled back from what you are writing and asked, what does this…my writing…mean? It it making sense to me? Will it make sense to a reader? 


To answer that question, I’d like you to think about the Core Emotional Truth of your writing. This is something that grows with the creation of a story. In other words, you might not recognise such a truth when you start writing––in fact such a truth might not be present when you start writing––but as the story comes into itself (often around the point you might finish a first rough draft), it is something you should think about. 


This core emotional truth (CET for short), is like a golden thread running all the way through a piece of fabric, and like beautiful embroidery it is usually bound up with the passion behind it.


Being passionate about your work will help tighten and bind it. But to create a narrative that really pulls the reader into the text and along the entirety of it, you have to believe yourself in its need to be released out there into the world; to be appealing to readers. Searching for the ‘point’ of what you are writing, so that the reader can understand why they should continue to read, suggests working towards fully understanding what has developed in your story (be it a short story or a longer novel). . You can, if you like, call it your  'Vision', 'Thesis' or 'The Premise'  (and even, perhaps wrongly 'your Theme')…the CET is a central, single concept that sums up your work; your ‘Core Emotional Truth’.

Don't get confused by my used of the word 'truth' here. Novels are inventions, made up in the writer's head, at least in part an invented narrative...a lie. Finding a core truth in such a fabrication is an emotional experience, not rooted in facts––for readers and their writers alike. To gain the readers empathy, there must be some sort of true thing that you are attempting to commnunicate, and that emotional truth will engender empathy and help hook the reader into the story. Most great classics of literature do this perfectly, and it is what they are loved for. 


Most of those great classics can have their core emotion truth summed up in a phrase––at most a couple of objective sentences, preferably in an abstract style, such as an aphorism. This phrase won't necessarily tell us about the contents of the story, or its subject, but about some fundamental truth of life, something that makes us all human. It doesn’t have to be a statement that everyone would agree with, but it must make sense to anyone reading it. Here' we're thinking about a summary of what a story is truly about – the deep core of what it is saying to its readers.


As an example let us think about a book we all probably know in some way; A Christmas Carol. The CET of this Dickens' small masterpiece would not be, for instance,


Scrooge learns to be a better person when he’s visited by the ghost of his partner…


That’s more of a ‘blurb’ really.  What about...


Financial wealth never makes you happy?


This is separate and slightly different from any themes you've been thinking belong to your work. The themes that run through a short story or novel can be reflected in symbolism within the story. They can usually be summed up in a word or phrase. In A Christmas Carol, the themes might be; ghosts, meanness, poverty––poverty of emotion…These probably will  link with the CET, but can be thought of as far more observable, something that the reader will ‘see’ as they read, and be able to isolate after reader, so, easier to explain to friends or use in a review. The CET is often ‘felt’ rather than discerned. 


I can recall the first CET I 'got' after reading a book. I was hanging out some washing and why ever the book came into my mind at that point, I dont know––hanging out washing is a pretty mindless task, after all. I'd just finished The Inheritors by William Golding, and though I'd enjoyed it and understood its themes of a doomed species, of violence and pacifity, I'd not thought further. Suddenly, as I pulled a peg out of the bag to pin up a sock, I realised how the entire story was explaining to me how people are; how humanity always behaves. In the book, Neanderthals are portrayed in the novel as peaceful, in contrast to the more aggressive Homo sapiens and are at the point of dying out. Now I could see how true that was; over and over, we've killed each other just as the new speces kills out the old. 


Exercise; Find your CET.

What do you believe your own CET might be? Remeber, the truth will grow with the writing of the story, so if you are still planning it out, don’t allow any attempt to be written in stone–– the time to finalize what your story is deeply about is when you have finished at least a single draft. But you can still have a go at developing something, because sometimes, isolating the emotional truth in your story can make the writing of it really zing; once you know what this story means to the world, you can drive towards a satisfying conclusion.


You can bear your themes, characters and plot structure in mind when you to sum up your novel, but be sure the CET is an entirely abstract sentence stating the core values of the book – something objective, not personal – it shouldn’t talk about characters or plot or be at all subjective. 


Writing your CET is amazingly revealing and can help whittle all those disparate thoughts down to a single essence. If often helps open and lift your narrative, so you can write from your heart. This is bound up with the ‘passion’ I spoke about above. Being passionate about your work will help tighten and bind it. But to create a narrative that really pulls the reader into the text and along the entirety of it, you need to let them see the ‘point’ of what you are writing, so that they understand why they should continue to read.




You can also read about the symbols that help form your themes in Kitchen Table Writers click on the links; 

Symbolism in Writing - The Tree

Symbolism in Writing - The Snake

Symbolism in Writing - The Chair

Symbolism in Writing - The Sea

Symbolism in Writing – The Sun



Monday, 28 October 2024

Writing the Global Crisis




The global crisis – climate heating, habitat loss and marine pollution among other human-sourced issues are blighting the natural world. They are also changing the lives of communities across the globe. Many students wish to write about this complex subject, but are often at a loss about where to begin and in which direction to head. 


I’m not going to pretend I know any more about the climate crisis than the reader, and I’m not going to look for the answers, Butt writing the climate crisis will allow us to become a little more aware of the issues around the subject and challenge our responses as writers. 


Are you considering writing about the changes in the climate, or threats to the diversity of the natural world? About the communities effected by changing environments, or about the routes to more sustainable living? You may already be writing about these things. You may even be imagining a different future world.


In this blogpost I want to discuss  some of the ways this sort of writing has been tackled by both fiction and nonfiction writers, and look at new and different ways of approaching these issues. I'll also take a punt on how this writing will present in the future. So, once you’ve read this post, do get back to me via the Comment Page, so that the discussion can continue. I’m including a few writing exercises which might help you feel more confident about approaching this vast subject, and have some new skills to enable this. 


When thinking about writing the environmental crisis try to separate out the approaches people are already making. Think about the re-evaluation of science, informed policymaking, and governmental choices, as well as the way protest groups and the small actions of ordinary citizens are forming the debate. What happens when these separate things are put into the melting pot? Different people may reach different conclusions, depending on what they value.


WHICH DEBATE ARE YOU WRITING?


There is no single issue here, but many issues all leading out of our overuse of natural resources. 


Global Warming is mostly caused by fossil fuels resulting in global greenhouse gas emissions which blanket the Earth, trapping the sun’s heat, and warming Earth faster than at any point in recorded history. Hotter temperatures over time are changing weather patterns and disrupting the usual balance of nature.


Environmental damage, of course this starts with the warming of the atmosphere, but also includes air pollution, poor soil management, insect loss leading to poor pollination, deforestation, growth of human population, food waste, global trade and urbanisation.


Biodiversity Loss

The past 50 years have seen a rapid growth of human consumption, population, resulting in humanity using more of the Earth’s resources than it can replenish naturally. 


More than 500 species of land animals are on the brink of extinction and are likely to be lost within 20 years; the same number were lost over the whole of the last century. The scientists say that without the human destruction of nature, this rate of loss would have taken thousands of years. 


Plastic Pollution and the marine crisis 

National Geographic found that 91% of all plastic that has ever been made is not recycled and plastic takes 400 years to decompose. 

The quantity of marine debris is increasing in oceans world-wide. Plastic pieces outnumber plankton on the ocean surface 6:1.In the ocean, plastic debris injures and kills fish, seabirds and marine mammals. In 2010, a California grey whale washed up dead on the shores of the Puget Sound. Autopsies indicated that its stomach contained a pair of pants and a golf ball, more than 20 plastic bags, small towels, duct tape and surgical gloves.


The Human Armageddons

These might include destruction of humanity through the dangers of AI, deadly new virus pandemics or even nuclear war,  


Exercise  

Focus tightly any one of the above aspects and write for ten minutes; 

  • A nonfiction summing-up of your feelings
  • A poem about your feelings
  • A snippet of new story with new characters
  • A continuation of something you’ve been writing.


Past, Present and Future

Climate change is not so much an “issue”––it is an emerging reality. This new reality unfolding has a past, present and a future. A past that has been largely obscured but which is now breaking out into mainstream consciousness. Writers are getting involved at all those points, writing and re-writing stories that we thought we knew, that we should know now, and that we might only speculate on.



There are separate debates within science, within policy and within economics. There are debates about how scientific findings should guide governmental and political policy. There are personal decisions being made all the time, some based on strong evidence that alterations to lifetstyle will help, some based on heresy or even conspiracy theories. Here are at least the major aspects of the global crisis.


Exercise 

How do you see the future of mankind or the Earth herself? Choose one aspect or idea for all the different possibilities of how life will be in say 50 or 100 years; have an educated guess, or, even better, create your idea of a future possibility. Such guesses can be as fun or as ridiculous as you wish. 


Here’s my suggestion; 2100: Humanity has been almost wiped out and people live in very small communities, which have lost the ability to communicate with each other.


Here’s the opening of a poem by Pascale Petit from her book Tiger Girl (Bloodaxe)


The day will come when the papers will only tell leaf-stories

Of blackbird’s  quarrels with sparrows


Their pages will roll back into  trees, 

and the front page will be bark…


Take one of these ideas; not necessarily your own, but the one that has triggered a small idea that you could write about for ten minutes. 


FINDING THE RIGHT GENRE OR FORM

There are specific genres springing up that deal solely with these issues. 

You might think about these alternatives when choosing how to structure your writing 

Ecofiction’ or ‘Cli-Fi’  allows novelists and short story writers to combine the art of storytelling with their ideas about the environmental challenges, and their predictions for the future. 


Stories scripted for TV, film, radio or even theatre, allow immediate reactions from the audience, and a wide ‘pick-up’. 


Some ideas for story, especially dramatised documentary stories may be a perfect fit for scripting. The global crisis is alive on TV and UK radio and that may help you get a positive answer to your pitch.


Nonfiction may be a more direct way of alerting people to issues than, fiction. Articles, papers and books are being writing all the time, so be sure to be original and keep within your own ‘voice’ and state your own passions.


Poetry is a wonderful way to express the ideas and emotions this subject raises. It touches people’s hearts…the only drawback may be that the people who read poetry are already ‘won over’ on this debate.


Eco nonfiction is not now in its infancy, but is flowering and there are opportunities to write nonfiction and narrative journalism,  bringing the facts creatively to a broad readership. Also known as ecological or environmental literature, this a genre that encompasses a diverse array of works spanning novels, short stories, and poetry which breathes life into the environmental movement through the power of storytelling.


At its core, eco-fiction seeks to illuminate the intricate web of relationships between humans and the natural world, exploring themes such as conservation, climate change, and biodiversity loss. Unlike traditional environmental literature, which often adopts a didactic tone, eco-fiction employs the art of storytelling to evoke empathy, fostering a deeper connection between readers and the environment. Novels like Flight Behavior by Barbara Kingsolver (Harper Perennial, 2013), in which blends science and a story about a bizarre act of nature, and The Overstory, winner of the Pulitzer Prize in Fiction, Richard Powers’s twelfth novel interlocks fables with a is a world alongside ours—vast, slow, interconnected, resourceful, magnificently inventive, and almost invisible to us.





Eco-fiction has a tendency to negate writing strategies such as conflict, tension and empathy, but  Kingsolver and Powers successfully demonstrates the implications of a changing planet while maintaining these important parts of writing fiction. 


We Are All Completely Beside Ourselves, by Karen Joy Fowler (Serpent's Tail 2014), deals with our attitude to animal welfare. The narrator, Rosemary describes her loneliness after the loss of her sister, Fern. A clever use of the ‘central reveal’ allows the writer to portray the plight of animals, both past and present, and describe the bonds that unite all sentient beings.


In fact novels with an ecological attitude are not new. Ursula Le Guin’s wonderful novel The Word for Tree is Forest  was written decades ago, and shows a wrecked Earth and the mining of other planet. The Drowned World was written by JG Ballard in 1962, but the concept of an overheated, rainy world is still amazingly pertinent.


Any perspective and approach are possible, if it’s undertaken in a well-informed, and well-crafted way. It could be a piece of New Nature Writing, a short story or chapter which dramatises an aspect of the Climate Emergency, a poem that articulates a more-than-human perspective, a script which brings to life the struggles of an eco-activist with a climate denier partner or parent.  

It has to be emphasised that one critical position isn’t the only one to be taken – a cross-section is a far better approach.  

The important thing to remember is that the ecological imaginary is broad and demands a multiplicity of perspectives. All voices are welcome – we all have an authentic, authoritative voice and a stake in the survival of our planet and species.    


Exercise

As our world grapples with pressing ecological challenges, authors are turning to the natural world as a muse, crafting narratives that delve deep into the interconnectedness between humanity and the environment.


  • Freewrite a short piece, to explore your own feelings on any the issues explored above
  • Read this piece, preferably aloud. Think about its possibilities. Make notes
  • Amalgamate your thinking into the freewrite Perhaps concentrate on one aspect. This can be the start of fiction, poetry or nonfiction.
  • Using all of this work start a piece of creative writing. 



THRUTOPIAS

Manda Scott has initiated a huge push for this sort of fiction. She says, in https://mandascott.co.uk/why-we-need-thrutopias/...

We know that inspiring stories shape our futures. Throughout human history, our power to imagine a better world has pushed – or pulled – us away from the comfort of the known.

But our stories of power, accumulation and self-aggrandisement have brought us to the edge of extinction and we urgently need new heroes, new ways of doing things, new peaks to aim for. If you knew you were at the last days of the human story, what would you write? How would you write?”

Thrutopian writing wants to move through the dystopian end that most novels about the future of humanity (both for adults and young adults) have. At the moment dystopian fiction tends to end with only a good outcome for the protagonist…the rest of that society is still living in misery. Thrutopias push through the idea that disaster is non-reversible, to look at how a better ending can be achieved.

It also delves into the embodied, local, and transhuman aspects, challenging conventional notions of 'nature' and the perceived separation between humanity and the natural world.  

By addressing the ever-present spectre of didacticism in speculative and dystopian fiction, the writer is encouraged to consider a spectrum of perspectives, and to make their own ‘ecologies’ of connection. The emphasis, then changes to be on how writers wish to explore the various global crises.  

Try reading these novels with a Thrutopian outcome The Future (9780008309176)

The Future by Naomi Alderson

Cloud Cuckoo Land, by Anthony Doerr 

 Any Human Power. by Manda Scott

Transrealism and the Transhuman

These words refer to writing that looks beyond human beings to robots and cyborgs.

With the 2016 TV serialisation into ten episodes of an adaptation of  Margaret Atwood's The Handmaid’s Tale (McCelland and Stewart 1985), not to mention her cyborg trilogy: Oryx and Crake also The Year of the Flood and Maddaddam, new forms of experience  are being explored. These are  literary modes that  attempt to mix the techniques of fantasy, science fiction, futuristic and dystopian literature with the technique of naturalistic realism, resulting in books like The Road by Cormac McCarthy (2006) and Matt Haig’s  2013 book for young adults, The Humans (Canongate Books), which has as its narrator an alien in the body of a Cambridge professor, constantly puzzled by our primitive ways until he begins to develop an emotional attachment to the lives of humans, in particular, our ‘gift for love’.

THE ANTHROPOCENE

The Anthropic PrincipleHumans have become the single most influential species on the planet, causing significant global warming and other changes to land, environment, water, organisms and the atmosphere. The word Anthropocene comes from the Greek terms for human ('anthropo') and new ('cene'), but its definition is controversial. It was coined in the 1980s, then popularised in 2000 by atmospheric chemist Paul J Crutzen and diatom researcher Eugene F Stoermer. The duo suggested that we are living in a new geological epoch.

Katie Pavid makes the case for the idea that we are living in a time many people refer to as the Anthropocene. She points out that: 

“It is widely accepted that our species, Homo sapiens, has had such a significant impact on Earth and its inhabitants that we will have a lasting - and potentially irreversible - influence on its systems, environment, processes and biodiversity.

The Earth is 4.5 billion years old, and modern humans have been around for around a mere 200,000 years. Yet in that time we have fundamentally altered the physical, chemical and biological systems of the planet on which we and all other organisms depend.

In the past 60 years in particular, these human impacts have unfolded at an unprecedented rate and scale. This period is sometimes known as the Great Acceleration. Carbon dioxide emissions, global warming, ocean acidification, habitat destruction, extinction and widescale natural resource extraction are all signs that we have significantly modified our planet.

Not everyone agrees that these changes represent enough evidence to declare a new formal geological epoch, the Anthropocene. Scientists all over the world are still debating.


LANGUAGE

Changing the way we word certain phrases makes a difference. Not long ago, we were talking about the ‘global warming theory’ and now we’re talking about the ‘global heating crisis’. Rather than 'climate skeptics', we talk about ‘climate deniers’. .

.Rather than ‘climate change,’ we talk about 'climate emergency'.


 One way to structure you language when starting to write is to work with

Opposites'. Consider; 


Hard science 

versus 

emotional reaction


Evidence of a global crisis

 Versus 

Conspiracy theories, corporate lying and disbelieve


Good Policy making

Versus 

Ignorant Policies or even blatant disregarding policy decisions


The macro and microcosms  The big players, governments, social media

 versus

 the little person and small communities. 


Groups or families in denial

Versus

People coming together to make a difference 


Using Metaphor

 Let's take a further look at Pascale Petit’s beautiful poem. It’s full of marvellous metaphors, which as a way of describing that can really help your language hit home when writing about emotively charged subjects like this one. Here are a few of her amazing metaphors



  • The buttress root of my armchair
  • Phones that light up with chorophyll
  • An apiary of apps
  • Retweet birdsong


Your writing has to be a pleasurable read. Of course, that means different things to different readers, but no one likes to be lectured or spoken down to. No one wants to be told how to think. Writing like a tub-thumper is likely to result in your work not being read. 


Statements made on paper always shut down debate. So use questions instead. Questions lead to stories...statements shut story down. Therefor if you feel ambivalent about any issue you want to write about don't hesitate to exploit your own hesitancies by asking difficult questions. Fiction especially should always be about 'asking the question' rather than finding the answer.


Be aware that you cannot use your own political aims or beliefs to stage a story or article; your own opinions cannot take centre stage. When writing  fiction, you will find that your created characters take over––they should be allowed to have their own opinions––it's the questions that arise from these that will make your story engrossing. 


The important thing to remember is that the this story of greenness and kindliness to the planet and its inhabitants is wide and broad and demands a multiplicity of perspectives. That means your voice, among so many others will be welcome – we all have an authentic voice when talking and writing about our planet and species.    



Exercise  

Take one image that is important to you that can represent what you feel about the way the planet is changing 


Try to express it in a metaphorical way.


OR


Create a tub-thumping character who feels very strongly about something. 

Start a monologue in their voice, let them state their opinions. Then start to move the debate, allowing subtle  caveats to creep into their minds; finish with the character acknowledging the opposite opinion. 


OR


Think about how you could use opposites in various ways in work you are approaching.



Earth From Space, Artwork Photograph by Detlev Van Ravenswaay

WHAT NOW?


All of these things are at your fingertips when writing the global crisis. But you cannot spread that writing too thinly. Think about all the aspects, components and issues I’ve raised and talked about in this one little post, and focus your thoughts narrowly to get the best impact into your writing. 


Good Luck!