The Mastery of Alan Holinghurst's Novels: Stellar Authors

Alan Hollinghurst at the 2011 Texas Book Festival,
copyright Larry D. Moore

 Alan Hollinghurst has written seven novels, has won numerous prizes, and is renown for being the author who elevated the genre of 'gay novel' to the heights of literary endeavour, being often compared to Henry James. Since winning the Booker, his novels has been heralded as a literary event worth the wait. His publisher, (Pan Macmillan) sums all this up as being about....the question of what it means to lead a life in thrall of the beautiful. 

But don't worry about all of that. Because above all things, a Hollinghurst is a cracking read.

His new novel, Our Evenings (2024) had me addicted for three all-consuming days, while I read steadily on through the almost 500 pages at breakfast, coffee, lunch, G&Ttime, dinner, throughout the evening and often, into the night. Nothing got done until the book was complete. And then, rather like the first 24 hours of a steaming affair, I lay back on my pillows and gasped, groaned, cried aloud, Oh, Alan, Alan!!! and found it difficult to sleep. 

The Guardian calls it 'his finest yet'; The novel tracks the currents of gay liberation and race relations, but with never a moment’s schematic overview...Of course, this is his best book. But then, I thought that of all of them. 

The Stranger's Child (2011), tells the story of a minor poet, Cecil Valance, who, before being killed in the First World War, writes a poem "Two Acres", which goes on to become famous.  As I read, I was searching for 'the stranger's child' within the novel, and not finding it, finally had to ask Google. It turns out to be a quote fromTennyson's "In Memoriam".

"And year by year the landscape grow / Familiar to the stranger's child." 

In 2012 interview, Hollinghurst explained how he thought 'the music of the words is absolutely wonderful, marvellously sad and consoling all at once. It fitted exactly with an idea I wanted to pursue in the book about the unknowability of the future'

This, I think may be the first of Hollinghurst's perennial themes, a gold thread in his work; the unknowability of the future. 

The Folding Star (1994) was my introduction to Hollinghurst. It's a hilariously funny book full of rampant gay sex and brilliantly executed scenes bursting with characters and dialogue. It is perhaps modelled slightly on Thomas Mann's Death in Venice, exploring the theme of transient beauty. So these two themes, 'the unknowable future', and 'ephemeral nature of beauty' run constantly through his books.

The Swimming Pool Library (1988), his first book, was the second one I read, having devoured  The Folding Star and wanting more. It won two prizes and is the perfect debut novel by someone not afraid to state upfront what their obsessions will be. It centres round a chance meeting where the main character saves the life of an older gay man in a public toilet, creating  a story revealed within the story, dealing  with ageing, race and cruelty, but also about keeping secrets…hiding the truth about yourself. Holinghurst starts his career as an author as he means to go on; strongly described gay sexual encounters, and lots and lots of characters who are often together in one scene.

The Line of Beauty (2004), deservedly won the Booker Prize. The 80's obsession with cocaine, and  the emerging AIDS crisis form backdrops, while he's again exploring class and  privilege and homosexuality. I had no trouble with this title because I was already getting the idea that beauty is part of Hollinghurst's passions. The line of beauty is a double "S" curve, called an ogee, used in textiles, architecture, wrought iron work and even ship-building. You could say the ogee 'swings both ways', reinforcing the theme of transient beauty and very casual sex, while the story moves through Thatcher's London, which would have been unknowable as it was happening, in the same way as tomorrow and next year is unknowable to us know. 

Of all his writing accomplishments and prowess, I think his expertise in crowd control is the one I really admire. It's so hard, as a writer, to handle scenes in which a lot of characters are moving, and chatting, at the same time. Parties are his go-to settings, and he's simply brilliant at guiding conversations that, as they go on in real time, have subtle meanings exuding from them: 

 Have a look at that Nick,’ Pete called out, as if amiably trying to keep him occupied. ‘You know what it is.’

‘That’s a nice little piece,’ said Leo

‘It’s a very nice little piece,’ said Pete. ‘Louis Quinze.’

Nick ran his eye over the slightly cockled boulle inlay. ‘Well, it’s an encoignure,’ he said, and with a chance at charm: ‘n’est ce pas?

‘It’s what we call a corner cupboard,’ Pete said. ‘Where did you get this one, babe?’

‘Ooh...I just found him on the street,’ said Leo, gazing quite sweetly at Nick and then giving him a wink. ‘He looked a bit lost.’

‘Hardly a mark on him,’ said Pete.

‘Not yet,’ said Leo.

‘So where’s your father’s shop, Nick?’ said Pete.

‘Oh, it’s in Barwick – in Northamptonshire.’

‘Don’t they pronounce that Barrick?’

‘Only frightfully grand people.’

Pete lit a cigarette, drew on it deeply, then coughed and looked almost sick. ‘Ah, that’s better,’ he said. ‘Yes, Bar-wick. I know Barwick. It’s what you’d call a funny place, isn’t it.’ (Pg 107)

Although this has been plucked from its context, the reader can see that speech and meanings are at complete odds. As the three characters talk about antique pieces, we are given glimpses of what they can see as well as the subtext, offered in mostly body language and speech patterns. Hollinghurst doesn’t allow the dialogue to stray from the context of the scene, but it’s easy to picture what is going on during the chat. In other words, he supports his dialogue. Lengthy pieces of dialogue in prose, unsupported by narrative description and action, can lose emotional hold on the reader. 

While I was reading Our Evenings, I kept changing my mind about what sort of book this was. At first I was sure this story was a bildungsroman––a coming of age novel, that charts the growth and change of the protagonist from childhood to adulthood. Soon, I realised that this would be the story of an entire life. Then, towards the end, I wondered if it might be a metafiction––when he grows towards old age, David decides to write his memoir. His husband asks what he'll call it and he takes that quote...'Our Evenings'. By the shocking end of the novel, you realise you might be reading just that...the memoir of this life, written by the man who lived it to his best. 

But––finally––I realised that what this novel does so brilliantly is map Britain’s changing attitudes to class, race, politics and sex from 1960 to 2010.

A triumph indeed!

Gerald Manley Hopkins

You might wonder at this stage, how Our Evenings came to have its title. David Win has to learn and recite at school the sonnet by Gerard Manly Hopkins; ‘Spelt from Sybil’s Leaves'.

    Óur évening is over us; óur night ' whélms, whélms, ánd will end us.

   The poem reflects what the book achieves; it leaps, it soars, from impermanence to timelessness. 

    Take a look at Alan Hollinghurst's canon, pick a book at random and enjoy... then post me a note at Kitchentable and let everyone know what you think of this masterful author. 

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Discovering Great New Writers–Meet the Womens Prize "Discoveries"

 

Right now I'm furiously reading The Women's Prize 2025 shortlist; six smashing novels by women published last year.  Here is the lowdown on three of them; 

BIRDING by Rose Ruane. I genuinely could not put this down. Perhaps there was one too many points of view and the end is not fulfilling, but it did grip me.

FUNDAMENTALLY by Nussaibah Younis. This is chuckle funny and that at first didn't sit well with me as it's about trying to help ISIS brides, but as the tension mounted, I could see that it was actually examining the issue in a deeper way. 

THE SAFEKEEP by Yoel Van der Wouden.  The worthy winner of the prize this year.   Holland in the 60's. In the family home, weighed down with duty, a youngish woman, lives alone, until her two siblings and a stranger arrives. This sexy, intensely emotion novel, suddenly reveals the darkest sides of wartime Europe.  

The choice of prizewinner didn’t surprise me; one of aims of the prize is to chose high excellence in writing, but also readable, approachable stories. This allows it to stand apart from other prizes, where winnering novels may be dense, even arcane and seem deliberately impenetrable. I think you can be profound and sibylline without trying to drown your reader in words. 

Some of the winners remain my favourite novels.

Maggie O'Farrel won in 2020 with Hamnet,
one of my favourite winners. 

The Women’s Prize has been running since 1994, annually awarding a female author of any nationality for the best original full-length novel written in English. Kate Mosse founded the prize, and has always responded to the criticism that women and men should compete directly, by saying… ‘It’s not about taking the spotlight away from the brilliant male writers, it’s about adding the women in.’ In 2023 it was announced that a sister prize, the Women's Prize for Non-Fiction, would be awarded for the first time in 2024, with a £30,000 prize.

And now, the Women’s Prize is also sponsoring new female writers with their new enterprise, ‘Discoveries’, which aims to seek out, inspire and support writers from early writing to long-term careers, with writer development programmes, toolkits, free events and online community create pathways.

Over 80% of entrants to the Discoveries development programme said they felt inspired to take steps towards achieving their writing goals and had gained more knowledge on the publishing industry.

This year, alongside those shortlisted for the main prize, six new writers have been chosen as Discoveries, having finished their novels. They are…

Shaiyra Devi, The Persistence of Gravity

Jac Felipez, A Long Ways from Home

Rosie Rowell, Down by the Stryth

Lauren Van Schaik, Seven Sweet Nothings

Muti’ah Badruddeen, A Bowl of River Water

Sophie Black, The Pass

The Women's Prize interviewed each one and I found so much to honour and to concur with each new writer. A lot of them started, as I did, very young. 

Shaiyra Devi says...I began writing fiction as soon I learned to write, filling a notepad with 1-page stories from the age of 5. At 10, I promised myself I’d write a book, and finished Diamonds & Daggers, an adventure fantasy novel, before 13…
Jac Felipez says...I

have been writing, in different ways, my whole life. From the first story my English teacher praised in front of the class to the novel-in progress..

.          Rosie Rowell says...I fell in love with writing from the moment I learned how to read. 

Lauren Van Schaik says...before I could hold a pen I tyrannically dictated stories to my parents.

And their responses to finding out they were shortlisted were amazing;

Muti'ah Badruddeen was...Breathless. I mean that literally. I screamed so much, I became breathless. I have a weak heart, and I don’t think it has stopped racing since I opened the email. I’m usually more on the self contained end of expression but Discoveries has unleashed the inner screamer I never knew...

Shaiyra Devi was...beyond ecstatic, totally over the moon! 

Lauren Van Schaik was...really honoured that the judges see the promise in this project. I’ve had so much fun writing it and can’t wait to share it even more widely.

Can they offer advice? Sophie Black suggests...To not get bogged down in details and research when you really need to just write – you can look at specifics when you’re editing. It worked like a charm because I’m not even 100% decided on my characters’ names – I only know how they feel and how they’d behave. 

What inspired them? For Jac Felipez...visiting the Lubaina Himid retrospective at Tate Modern in 2022...The exhibition prompted me to revisit the 1980s, a decade characterised by uprisings, radical activism, and vibrant artistic expression. Felipez is writing a contemporary story that connects to the 1980s...

For Saiyra Devi it was... The seed for my current novel sprouted in a fiction writing workshop in my final year of college, and it has consumed me ever since...

Rosie Rowell's idea came from TikTok, admitting...doomscrolling finally pays off!... 

  Muti'ah Badruddeen started A Bowl of River Water by writing about her grandmother's life.

...She was an incredible woman...But the more I wrote, the bigger it got away from the details of her life; coming to encompass, instead, the idea of women who, despite dominant narratives about the period and cultural context, fought in their own way to subvert societal norms that infringed on their autonomy and personhood.  

Lauren Van Schaik's story Seven Sweet Nothings was inspired by a true story... polygamist sect leader Warren Jeffs taking his favourite wives to Disney...while he was a federal fugitive. What happens when sheltered wives are removed from the compound and dropped into our world — or rather, the sanitised, perpetually happy theme park pastiche of it?

Reading about their committments to their writing, their love of fiction, and the inspirations behind the stories was very reassuring. You can find more about them at https://womensprize.com/meet-the-2025-discoveries-shortlistees/

Core Emotional Truth

 

…Emotional truth is elusive and difficult to capture. No standard definition exists. Here’s my crack at it: Emotional truth allows readers to feel a certain way about the experiences of people who may live different lives from them. It’s the lens that allows us to see ourselves in a story that results in a heartfelt connection in a fictional narrative. Emotional truth transcends facts...Writer's Digest. 

Writing fiction? Have you ever pulled back from what you are writing and asked, what does this…my writing…mean? It it making sense to me? Will it make sense to a reader? 

To answer that question, I’d like you to think about the Core Emotional Truth of your writing. This is something that grows with the creation of a story. In other words, you might not recognise such a truth when you start writing––in fact such a truth might not be present when you start writing––but as the story comes into itself (often around the point you might finish a first rough draft), it is something you should think about. 

This core emotional truth (CET for short), is like a golden thread running all the way through a piece of fabric, and like beautiful embroidery it is usually bound up with the passion behind it.

Being passionate about your work will help tighten and bind it. But to create a narrative that really pulls the reader into the text and along the entirety of it, you have to believe yourself in its need to be released out there into the world; to be appealing to readers. Searching for the ‘point’ of what you are writing, so that the reader can understand why they should continue to read, suggests working towards fully understanding what has developed in your story (be it a short story or a longer novel). . You can, if you like, call it your  'Vision', 'Thesis' or 'The Premise'  (and even, perhaps wrongly 'your Theme')…the CET is a central, single concept that sums up your work; your ‘Core Emotional Truth’.

Don't get confused by my used of the word 'truth' here. Novels are inventions, made up in the writer's head, at least in part an invented narrative...a lie. Finding a core truth in such a fabrication is an emotional experience, not rooted in facts––for readers and their writers alike. To gain the readers empathy, there must be some sort of true thing that you are attempting to commnunicate, and that emotional truth will engender empathy and help hook the reader into the story. Most great classics of literature do this perfectly, and it is what they are loved for. 

Most of those great classics can have their core emotion truth summed up in a phrase––at most a couple of objective sentences, preferably in an abstract style, such as an aphorism. This phrase won't necessarily tell us about the contents of the story, or its subject, but about some fundamental truth of life, something that makes us all human. It doesn’t have to be a statement that everyone would agree with, but it must make sense to anyone reading it. Here' we're thinking about a summary of what a story is truly about – the deep core of what it is saying to its readers.

As an example let us think about a book we all probably know in some way; A Christmas Carol. The CET of this Dickens' small masterpiece would not be, for instance,

…Scrooge learns to be a better person when he’s visited by the ghost of his partner…

That’s more of a ‘blurb’ really.  What about...

Financial wealth never makes you happy?

This is separate and slightly different from any themes you've been thinking belong to your work. The themes that run through a short story or novel can be reflected in symbolism within the story. They can usually be summed up in a word or phrase. In A Christmas Carol, the themes might be; ghosts, meanness, poverty––poverty of emotion…These probably will  link with the CET, but can be thought of as far more observable, something that the reader will ‘see’ as they read, and be able to isolate after reader, so, easier to explain to friends or use in a review. The CET is often ‘felt’ rather than discerned. 

I can recall the first CET I 'got' after reading a book. I was hanging out some washing and why ever the book came into my mind at that point, I dont know––hanging out washing is a pretty mindless task, after all. I'd just finished The Inheritors by William Golding, and though I'd enjoyed it and understood its themes of a doomed species, of violence and pacifity, I'd not thought further. Suddenly, as I pulled a peg out of the bag to pin up a sock, I realised how the entire story was explaining to me how people are; how humanity always behaves. In the book, Neanderthals are portrayed in the novel as peaceful, in contrast to the more aggressive Homo sapiens and are at the point of dying out. Now I could see how true that was; over and over, we've killed each other just as the new speces kills out the old. 

Exercise; Find your CET.

What do you believe your own CET might be? Remeber, the truth will grow with the writing of the story, so if you are still planning it out, don’t allow any attempt to be written in stone–– the time to finalize what your story is deeply about is when you have finished at least a single draft. But you can still have a go at developing something, because sometimes, isolating the emotional truth in your story can make the writing of it really zing; once you know what this story means to the world, you can drive towards a satisfying conclusion.

You can bear your themes, characters and plot structure in mind when you to sum up your novel, but be sure the CET is an entirely abstract sentence stating the core values of the book – something objective, not personal – it shouldn’t talk about characters or plot or be at all subjective. 

Writing your CET is amazingly revealing and can help whittle all those disparate thoughts down to a single essence. If often helps open and lift your narrative, so you can write from your heart. This is bound up with the ‘passion’ I spoke about above. Being passionate about your work will help tighten and bind it. But to create a narrative that really pulls the reader into the text and along the entirety of it, you need to let them see the ‘point’ of what you are writing, so that they understand why they should continue to read.

You can also read about the symbols that help form your themes in Kitchen Table Writers click on the links; 

Symbolism in Writing - The Tree

Symbolism in Writing - The Snake

Symbolism in Writing - The Chair

Symbolism in Writing - The Sea

Symbolism in Writing – The Sun